I’m editing Crisis Point for the third time to make it better by using the things I learned on A215 Creative Writing. One of the most valuable things I got from that was that you need feedback from real people to help you get better as a writer. Hence the use of wattpad (although I’ve also sent the story to a few of the other A215 veterans for their comments too).

Here is the beginning of Crisis Point on wattpad. For obvious reasons I’ll not be posting the whole story there, but I’ll post a few more sections than the three that are there already.

If you would like to be a beta reader for me then please drop me a line, either in the comments section, on the facebook page linked on the right or by email.